rest of chapter 1

the rest of chapter 1

Elizabeth sat at the kitchen table and stared at her fingers, thinking about her problem. Now, to understand Elizabeth's problem, you have to understand Elizabeth and her life. You see, Elizabeth's life was completely normal in nearly very aspect, but that was exactly Elizabeth's problem. "My life is too boring." Elizabeth decided. " In fact, I'm boring " Elizabeth moaned . "I have unexciting straight brown hair, plain brown eyes, a blase face, average height and weight, average grades, normal friends and boring hobbies. I need a new, exciting, and quirky friend, fast."  Elizabeth thought about who should be her new friend but no one came to mind. Elizabeth only had normal classmates. The next day at school was no better. No matter how hard she looked, Elizabeth could not find a single interesting person. She found  an abundance of annoying, popular, nerdy, and average people but not even a slightly exciting person. Elizabeth was ready to give up when she heard the most popular girl in school say ..... 

Author's Note

what do you think Elizabeth heard? the person who guesses correct with earn a lama badge!!!

Reviews

[PokemonFan#1]

Hmmmm... that's a hard guess....Let me think...UHHHH!!! Um....the most popular girl say's....ummm...hmmm....baaaa! Its to hard! Oh! Wait! Does she say something like, "Wanna be friends?" or, "Lets be friends." or even, "Be my friend!" Is that what it is? Or maybe I'm totally off.

By the way, great write! keep it up!

[InkAngelXIII]

Uhh... she saw dayman? You have me interested though.

[Tardisbaby]

"I'm pregnant?" haha. I can't wait to read more!

[Daniel]

Good beginning maybe she would sayd something she has seen abnormally like a supernatural, or gossip for a drama, or s**t talking if you want b*****s being slapped in the face.

[halflives]

Nice! This is very well written. However, the length is kinda short and there's a few grammarish mistakes. If you want them, I'll correct them, but if not, I'll leave 'em alone.

My guess is that she saw her boyfriend cheating on her, and she confided in Elizabeth because she thought she had no one to tell?

[TawnyBlueStar]

"It's all a blur.........Like a horrible day-mare" XD
guessing shes in the middle of a story lol
very good so far

[StillShorterThanYou]

"oh donkeys and bettles worth!"
that's what i think she says. and i like it so far :)

[GhostlyAuthor]

review me!!!!!!!!!!!!! i don't care if you absolutely hate or love it, just give me reviews so i know what you think so that i may keep doing the things people like and correct my mistakes

[C.A.Jordon]

... vote for me to be come class president. (so i can have eating out of my palms (evil laughter).

[GhostlyAuthor]

ok 19 of you have viewed my story but only 2 of you have reviewed. please review or i will assume you hate it and stop writing it.