lily's story

lily's story

A Story by GhostlyAuthor
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i don't know how to describe it but please just read it

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                        Chapter 1

                                   In which lily gets a royal surprise

Lily was sitting in the cool, damp grass, curled up, asleep, next to the warm body of Rosin (rose-in), the merlong (a wolflike creature). A warm summer breeze blew against her back as the sun was warming her. She was nestled in the crook of a tree, the soft, wet soil between her toes. The air was humid but not hot. In short, the perfect day for doing nothing. Lily’s long, curly, dark red, hair was splayed across her back.  Lily was a tall, shapely elf of about 16 with long, auburn curls, deeply tanned skin, freckles and a long, diagonal scar over her left eye. (By the way, elves are human sized not short!) “LILY!”A loud, screechy voice woke lily up. Lily rubbed her eyes sleepily and sat up. She glanced at the sundial in the middle of garden. “Oh no, I’ll be late!”She cried, leaping to her feet. Lily grabbed her bag and ran, Rosin alongside her. She hurried into the house and up the stairs. Ms. Triss came flying into the room, all in a panic. Ms. Triss was a tall imposing old lady with her long white hair in a tightly wound bun. Ms. Triss always had this look on her face like she had smelled something foul, her long pointy nose in the air as if she was trying sniff out every little fault. Her rectangle spectacles that she used to look down at everyone, were on the end of it. (Her nose, that is) “You’re going to be late for the Choosing!” Ms. Triss screeched at the top of her lungs, failing her arms now. She was almost in hysterics. The Choosing was an ancient ritual that happened every five hundred years.  During the Choosing, the next Queen was chosen. (Hence the name) “It not like I’m going to be chosen! Why do I have go?” Lily complained. “To represent your father and his business” Ms. Triss replied, exasperated. Lily sighed, slipping into the forest green dress. Lily ran outside and over the rough cobblestone, Ms. Triss following at her heels.  She stepped into the carriage and Rosin stepped in behind her. “Not the mutt!”Ms. Triss said pointing to Rosin. Rosin growled, baring her teeth.

“Either she goes or I stay” Lily stated calmly. “Fine” Ms. Triss said, ringing her hands. “Just go.” Rosin grinned.  Lily gingerly closed the door as the carriage speed away. When the carriage reached Thwynefare, (Th-when-fair) Lily pushed the door open and ran to the congested town square. She squeezed through the crowd and ran for it. “Ow!” She yelled as she fell to the ground. Lily started to apologize to whoever she bumped into. “Sor……ry?”  Her jaw dropped as she stared up, startled, at the ELF QUEEN!?!?! Lily blinked. “No! This isn’t happening! I did NOT just embarrass myself in front of THE QUEEN!!!” Lily 

© 2012 GhostlyAuthor


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this is as far as I've written. tell me if you like it.

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Even if it is in complete it is till a great story. discription was well don. Ididn't find any grammar errors. I think you would really enjoy my Boken story.

Posted 13 Years Ago


AHHHHHHHHHHH!!! i am so sorry!! i have lost the rest of this story!!!!!!! as soon as i find it i will post the rest

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good start! Keep on writing! =)

Posted 13 Years Ago


iok i wil post the rest

Posted 13 Years Ago


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ooooooooooh! coolz yeah you had few typo errors but no harm done nice story though.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like. It's very nice.I think it's a good storyline.Knida like a newspaper article.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This fantasy story is very cute and charming! I should really like to read more of Lily and Rosin! (:

Posted 13 Years Ago



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