This Girl

This Girl

A Poem by Tierra Starr

This girl, so sad she cries an ocean
So lonely she comes undone
But when she smiles, it shines so bright
It makes you wonder why it isn't the sun.

© 2013 Tierra Starr


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Girl! This is stunning and epic in such a short space. Love it! You are beautiful btw :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tierra Starr

11 Years Ago

Thank you honey :)
Reneé H

11 Years Ago

Of course
Good Job. The people who are the saddest have the most meaningful smiles.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

short and sweet...

moods turn on a dime...

and the smile can wipe away all else..

nicely compact and impactful piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tierra Starr

11 Years Ago

Thank you :) I am basically talking about someone who's depressed and thinks little about themselves.. read more

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3 Reviews
Added on March 2, 2013
Last Updated on March 22, 2013
Tags: hyperbole, poem, poetry, girl, sad

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Tierra Starr
Tierra Starr

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I am a 20 year old just entering college looking for my writing identity. I have a passion that I haven't often shared and i'd love for my voice to finally be heard. more..

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