Falling

It's always something in my thoughts

Something in me gave as I looked around 

Rooms and colours, and every single sound 

Falling endlessly into dream world after another 

Everything, everyday just wishes to smother me 

In some way or other... Fear drives me through 

Through rooms and colours, sounds too... 

And to me that's determination and accomplishment

Even if I was thrown to the waves, thrashed and sunken 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Janna]

Very relatable words. Drives right to the heart of the struggles of every brave being - regardless of how big or small the obstacle they tackle.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"And to me that's determination and accomplishment
Even if I was thrown to the waves, thrashed and sunken"
That's the spirit.. No matter what happens, rise everytime you fall..nice write up..