Tell Me About And Show Me Your Broken Battered Being

Your bruises and your scars and your wounds and your friendly reminders

Tell me how it feels to hold your heart in your hand 
Show me what it's like to cast your shadow across the land 
Tell me how it feels, the knife, as you bleed out of your back 
Show me what it's like to have all you see be black 
Tell me how it feels as you drop down on your knees 
Show me what it's like as time begins to freeze 
Tell me how it feels as you fall face down on the floor 
Show me what it's like to be broken to the core 

Author's Note

Review. Please. Be fair

Reviews

[Rose]

So emotional and poetic...really great :)

[Kirsty Woodward]

I love this. Beautiful write.

[Addict With a Pen]

Very poetic, and beautifully written. It's critical to have someone to be there, to listen when someone is going through something, that you've created to sound so tragic.

[zaisham9393]

Honestly, I loved it !! Awesome work :))!!

[KBW]

Feel in love with this piece! Keep up the work. Your words are beautifully put together and I can feel the emotion so very strong here.

[Kathryn Smith]

This is brilliant! I wouldn't want to show you..It's awful. :(

Very well written my dear! xx Loved every line.