Romeo & Juliet (Too Bad She Was A Savage)

Just something I thought up to be perfectly honest

I wanted windows, by yonder explosions and lights, to break 
But all I got was the alternative, love something ever so fake 
"Romeo! Romeo! Where for art thou? So I can stick this dagger, 
this dagger so far into your chest that you will begin to stagger!" 
How we met in the moonlight, it was everything out of a script 
The way you held me close, drew the knife, leading me to the crypt 
Now this tomb is lonely for now, someday soon you'll get your just desserts 
When your story is finished, I'll make sure you rot, you pervert! 

Author's Note

Please give me feedback

Reviews

[Kirsty Woodward]

I liked the beginning better than the ending.
Also, I'm not sure about the font you've used. It's not a big deal but it makes it really hard to read haha.

[Amber C]

Loved it, I can picture this being a song