Keep Going

Keep Going

A Poem by tiana hernandez

People will talk 
You continue to walk
People will doubt 
You show what your about 
Don't bring it all to the table
Show what your capable 

Be the strength 
Because they don't know the length
The goals and plans you have
Take it to the grave 
And keep it to yourself
As you show everyone your self worth
Knowing you have the power
Bring it up above the tower
Run for your success
And dont worry about the rest 
Chase your dreams
And always remember not everything is what it seems

© 2019 tiana hernandez


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This work comes across as a willingness to be independent and uncowed by the doubts of the crowd. It communicates a go for it attitude. The last line seems to be a reminder that at times caution is necessary.
This one should be read frequently as a means of keeping focused and determined.
PS: in the last line of verse 1, consider replacing what with that.


Posted 4 Years Ago


tiana hernandez

4 Years Ago

Thank you:-) Appreciate your feedback. Keep reading and stay tuned🙌✨🙏
This poem is awesome. I like how most of it rhymes. Such a powerful message. Great write here.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Added on November 16, 2019
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tiana hernandez
tiana hernandez

NY



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Hi world. I write poems on my free time. I tend to hit on topics that are based on real life, such as pain,love, healing,strength,faith,happiness,etc. While reading my poems you will read about diffe.. more..

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