You

Day after day

I didn't know what to say 

Have you in my face and all I can say is hey 

Look you in the eye

And I look down and sigh

As you breathe

I look up

Feeling my heart beat faster

Knowing my past has been a disaster

Now your here

Where it feels like you made my problems disappear

Its you

You that makes my mind clear and blue

You that makes my heart drop

You that makes all my negative thoughts stop

You calm me down

When I just look down and frown

You make me smile

While making me know this isn't another trial

Trial of love

That felt endless and up above

Love that was fake

That now I get, accept, and take

I took the craziness

Now look at me in love with love that is so endless

Took me for me

As I accepted everything and let it be

Started new

With someone who was true

True about their feeling

True about their caring

Month after month

I knew what to say

Feeling you looking at me

While I looked up and smile

And all along I should've had you on speed dial

As I hear your heart beat

I look down to my feet

Now your there

Letting me know how much you care

Its you 

You that makes me feel better

You that makes me be greater

Its always been you..

Reviews

[Louis McKraker]

This is a wonderfully heartfelt piece. I'm also glad to see I'm not the only one who still likes to write long. Short-form doesn't do much for me anymore, but you've spent a respectable length here getting your soul into each and every line--one stanza at a time.
keep churning out these wonderful verses, and i will be around to read more of them.

-Louis

[tiana hernandez]

Thank you! I appreciate that a lot. Stay tuned :)