life without a filter

Could you imagine it,
A place with no secrets, no need for them.
Just imagine it,
Love trust and honesty,
No angry lies.
No reason to lie,
Can you imagine it
No holding back
Fury, rage,
Loosing any fragment of control,
Do you feel it
That powerful rush coursing through you
Like a plain gone wild,
Reach out for it , that terror and distress
Yet exhilarating with life.
And its gone
Your perfect life, its gone
The secrets you should have kept.

Author's Note

Sorry for the grammar mistakes please tell me what you think i would appreciate feeback thank you for reading

Reviews

[Silver]

I love this one , yes I can feel it , and yes I can imagine and wish to that kind of world

[IzzyFBB]

Sounds like heaven! Loved it, I would keep it the way it is. Great job.

[tiajam]

thank you i really appreciate this