Too Short To Last

A poem about seasons changing

You're stuck in the past but need to look forward

See summer in its prime days

Wondering why it's cold so you finally turn

Only to find everything green turning

Beautiful colors: Red, Yellow, Orange.

After saying good-bye to summer

It's only a few short weeks

With the a season we call Autumn.

Winter comes faster than you know

Making you thicken your coats,

Wear boots,

And Celebrate

The first layer of snow

Pure and so white

Makes you believe

In the life having

Joy

That's TOO SHORT TO LAST

Reviews

[Invisible Ink]

First, I checked you out because I really liked your name, "Silently Living As Hazel," a little poem in itself...
I really liked the imagery in these lines...

Wondering why it's cold so you finally turn
Only to find everything green turning
Beautiful colors: Red, Yellow, Orange.

Making you thicken you coats, (I Really like this line!!) I was wondering if you mean your or with? coats - but I still think it's a great line

See summer in it's prime days (correction - its)
That's TO SHORT TO LAST (correction - TOO SHORT)

[cfix]

This is amazing really, I enjoyed the winding down at the end, starting with
The first layer of snow. Awesome write and enjoyable!

[Lilly Negoi]

time does tend to flow faster and faster, at least this is the impression most people have. and the truth is we should always treasure what we have in present :). very well done here!

[nono]

It's awesome! I love it! Really well done, and awesome flow! And such a loud ending. lol. No really nice job!