Run Wild.

true love

Run wild with me through the forest, the wind dancing through our hair and the world galloping past our feet. I long to set you free. Wild at heart and full of adventure. I long to surrender all of me. Travel the world with me, let's discover unknown lands.  Let's sail through the ocean, our toes crunching in the sand. Listen to the symphony with me, the melody waltzing through our ears. The sound of our hearts beating together, is the secret only we can hear.  Gaze at the stars with me, we'll name galaxies after our love. We'll fall asleep in each others' arms, as moonbeams bathe us from above. Grow old with me, our bodies changing form.You look more beautiful to me now all wrinkled and worn. Come away with me, far from the maddening crowds, we'll  laugh through life's tears and dance through death's clouds.   

 

Author's Note

To the person my soul loves.

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

One of my fav. writes for sure!

The piece that you've come up with's seemed to be written with free-mind - a very refreshing & calm sensations of head. I believe, when the mind's at work, it leads the heart to the right direction. And, To a writer, it works furiously. In your poetry, your mind makes you wanting everything when you claims yourself to be slept into his arms & your heart convince you to walk the whole shades of life & death together.. breathing goodness & aches together, no matter what the world's meant to be 'bout. Love's spiritless but its sensations are not. Very beautiful & thought provoking piece of art you've painted 'pon words. Enjoyed reading it. I find your very good at writing such fables so have at it. I'd be expecting to read some more such pieces.

[thundershine]

they're only fables if you believe them to be ;)

[Adam Adams]

Well.. you make me chuckle now. Umm.. they ain't even "just" fables but the true & real nice sensations / feelings of your deepen heart that come forward into words... & you shape 'em all very well ;)

[thundershine]

thank you :D

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Gorgeous photos to accompany the most beautiful words... this is what it is to hear the soul speak... well-done!

[thundershine]

thank you!

[S.A. Kurzweil]

It's so wondrous and romantic with a great rhythm. In many respects it reminds me of the song Maestro by Hans Zimmer. It played in my head as I read (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SvtaNQw4sGA, 1 minute and 30 seconds into the song). It feels as if both emulate each other, one in the form of writing and the other in the form of music. Comparing my feelings about this poem to one of my favorite songs speaks for itself.

[thundershine]

Wow, thank you so much! I listened to the song...it definitely would fit! I would almost think of this song to inspire the poem :D
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SNovPd8raRg&list=PLA95E8C10A1445663&index=15

[Maja]

I loved every line in this poem. It felt like a breath of fresh air; true love has that effect on you. Even though some of the lines spoke of a degree of intensity, like the first line, it didn't feel that way at all. It felt like lush greenery and peace. You really are in love, and the feeling emanates from the poem. I can't even pick a favorite line because they're all wonderful. Reading this was an adventure, and it makes one long for a love. Wonderful, wonderful writing. :)

[thundershine]

Thank you very much, Maja :)

[wordman]

a beautiful write,the image was great,the theme of the write is priceless

[thundershine]

Thank you!!

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[jeannemarie coulter]

beautiful words creating images that shine...well done...

[thundershine]

Thank you, Jeannemarie :)

[Cherry Pepperweb]

This is stunning, I love this feeling of endless and eternal love you've captured.
Beautiful poetry thundershine.

[thundershine]

Thank you very much, Cherry Pepperweb :)