On My Way To School

First hit

My lip splits

Eyes swell

This won’t end well

Kicked in my knee

D****t please

Just let me be

Why are you doing this to me!

They take my homework and rip it

They see my money so they steal it

They like my shoes so they take them

It’s one of me and many of them

“Leave me alone just leave me alone I promise I won’t tell”

Ring ring, Oh my God I’ve been saved by the bell

Or at least so I thought

Hmm maybe I should have fought

I have to remember

Sticks and stones may break my bones….

Retard

Fatso

Ugly

Weirdo

Freak

Prick

…. But names can really hurt me

I go up the stairs and through the doors

My face and my clothes are messy but no one cares

I go to the bathroom and clean up the mess

It’s ok though

Because I know

I will be safe

… Until recess

Author's Note

This by far isn't my best poem but it still came from the heart so I hope everyone likes it. I would like critism... Just don't be to harsh:)

Reviews

[Brenden Moran]

Its pretty good and creative poem about a real, unfortunate problem. "Ring ring, Oh my God "I'm" saved by the bell" try that. and "they see my money and steal it". Good job again, its nice to see some people are creative;)

[Bridget Murphy]

Another well done poem i enjoyed it a whole lot. Keep up the writing!!!:)

[Thea]

Aw, who would not hate being bullied?
I love how the poem ends...This piece is so unique of all the writings I've read today...Excellent poem... :)))

[paparapapa]

Wow. You captured the feeling of being bullied well. I particularly liked the last two lines! Great idea. ;) Thank you for sharing. :D

[Dezzyray]

i like this alot! it really captures the victims point of view and their emotions and intense fear.

[(☞ﾟヮﾟ)☞Emmett..]

*o* Wow, I'd hate to be that kid. Very excellent poem, I think it tells well of the old days of bullying. Nowadays bullying occurs on the internet, at least to me considering how much I've seen. People are just so mean to one another for reasons so stupid, and even as to be so cowardly and beat someone up in a group. Your poem just makes me want to beat someone up! D:< Oh wait, no... it should be the opposite. xD It makes me want to beat up a bully and help the bullied. Yeah!!! lol But that still won't be right. Thanks for sharing your poem, very nice job. ^w^

[WritersSoul]

wow, this is a great and creative piece and i love the way you simpled out from a story right into a poem. This happens basdically everyday around the whole world :/ Bullying really should be stopped, yet, its life...? its like a passing through school :P But anyway, i loved the way you set it out, i don't see anything bad ^^ I have 'break' instead of 'recess' :D
Beth :3