I'm Lost

I’m lost

Lost in this sea of blackness

Lost in the world of no hope

Alone to perish

Never to be held

I’m lost

And I will never be found

For no one has ever been this far gone

Its over

My life is over

I can’t see

I don’t know where to go

But I know I’m scared

I want to run

I want to hide

I want to go run and hide

But where

Where do I go

I’m lost

Lost in the back of my mind

Hope?

Love?

Those two things I pray I’ll find

I need help

Someone help me

I’m lost

Lost in the wilderness

Lost in the unsafe zone

Lost in this hell

Where do I go?

How do I get out?

Can I get out?

I’m stuck

Stuck in this depression

Stuck in the ray of darkness

I don’t know what to do anymore

Will someone help me?

I’m lost

Author's Note

I Just pulled up microsoft word and started typing. I let my mind and my fingers guide me and they came up with this... sure tells how i was feeling in the moment

Reviews

[TKJules]

Okay your lost. What are you lost from, besides love and hope. What caused it, where is there hope to be found or is there. No conclusion, only a situation your in. Go somewhere with it, direct it and leave me feeling like your thoughts led you to some conclusion besides being lost. Your prose though poignant is pointless. I say this with all due respect and most certainly encourage you to continue. I have my first novel coming out in Mid March titled Titus Hill and i can tell you it was no picnic as my editors and creative people picked my stuff apart. What I have now though is an exemplary piece of work and I am very proud. I suggest you develop thick skin and understand with millions of opinions you'll always find a few that don't please you, but even those have a message. If I may ever assist you or offer guidance in any way I am always supportive of fellow writers. Bill...

[Angad Waraich]

Expressive and depressing.
It is clear that you have taken to the dark aspects of life in your writing .
Maybe give the positive a chance.

Thank you

[Amanda Buscemi]

A brave statement of what many people feel but do not express. This poem gets down to the very core of what it means to be a human.

[Cosmic Dreamer]

depressing, but I really do like it. The panic comes across in your writing through the short sentences and the repetition. Excellent poem, and I'm sorry that you feel/felt depressed. Smile, your poems are brilliant!

[Akshat♥]

Life is sometimes like this..all lost in your own world..
no one knows what you are doing in it..
so try to lost in someones eyes..lol!!
awesome poem:)

[Dove]

Thank you for the reviews everyone

[alegria]

nice spontanious feelings of bein lost...can feel how u feel at times..

[paul]

the '...this far gone line' is excellent and very well placed.

'Stuck in the ray of darkness' -is brilliant

[paul]

i'm lost too. great poem.

[WritersSoul]

wow the amount of times i go there :P and i can tell its depressing, just my type of poem i love to read :P Really good :)