I Am

I am the kid

Trying to have fun

All the time

 

I am the girl

Who walks around depressed

Wishing people would listen

 

I am the teen

Who tries so hard

Wishing she could succeed

 

I am the friend

Who has all the advice

But can't follow it

 

I am the lover

Who looks everywhere

Trying to find that one special person

 

I am the cutter

With a blade at my skin

Cutting all the pain away

 

I am

The kid

The girl

Thr teen

The friend

The lover

And the cutter

Who really just wants

To be set free

Reviews

[Black]

Wishing she could suceed

isnt it succeed?

some powerfull emotions there,
i hope it isnt what you do,
cuz it wont help, it will only scar your skin for a long while,
i hope u will find the strenght , to carry on

[Joiedevivre]

Ah this cuts my heart.. I know this feeling and you did a really great job of evoking it.

[WritersSoul]

This poem is soo true and exact. I can picture me all the way through :O i shouldnt at the cutter part, but i do :( soo yes, this poem is great! :3