Sage

Vision becomes clear,
By your side, right here.
These static touches,
Are inducing euphoric rushes.
Heads spinning,
Minds shining,
Bodies entwining...
Build it up
To knock it down.
But it's cascading all around;
Immersing our dreary hearts.
Blissfull tension,
in apprehesion of the next... Part,
our ways.
But I plead, please,
only for a couple of days?!
Phase, phasing.
Phrase these words:
"I love... You"
And i think you want to, too.

Yet I sense your hesitation,
confused frustration.
You open and close this book,
Allowing only the briefest of looks.
You, the all knowing Sage..
your tired knowledge;
slipping,
through the flicking,
Of every page.
But the heavy noose
Around your neck,
Is growing loose.
Hands reach out, again
Stroking, teasing
Easing
That burdening pain.
Don't, hold back,
We're ready for this attack.
Just trust, the phrase...
I - love - you.

Author's Note

Any feedback at all is deeply appreciated!

Reviews

[Skuldaegz]

Very good. Especially liked the lines relating to a sage flipping through pages. The whole poem flows well and one can immerse themselves into it with ease.

[thumbelina]

Thank you for the feed back! :)

[The Blogger]

I like this :) I like the way you used your words in this poem :) phrase "I love you" :) keep writing :)

[thumbelina]

Thankyou kindly!!

[The Blogger]

Ur welcome :)

[My_Obsidian_Eye]

wonderful and a snappy read(don`t get lost in the lines) kudos look forward to reading more :3

[thumbelina]

Thankyou so much!

[j.t. Nawn]

"you, the all knowing sage" oh man how deep i feel that. this is just simply beautiful. thank you, thumbelina.

[thumbelina]

Thankyou so much, that's truly lovely to hear!!

[warfig]

easy to visualize - Bravo !

[thumbelina]

Thankyou!!

[RayXor]

deep deep words sometimes stronger than the most well written poems

[thumbelina]

The power of words has always been something I value. Thankyou!