Loving Him More hurts

Loving Him More hurts

A Poem by Julie

You think you're in love
until your heart shatters
everything just falls apart
so now nothing matters.
your vision is blurred
and you become blind
nothing can stop you
from looking on the downside.
Only loving them hurts 
you more when you find
out it's a regret.
so you just let your 
life pass you by
thinking he'll come back
you don't move on 
 where the time has frozen
until another guy comes a long
and your heart opens.
But not for long
will it last
everything went down 
the drain so fast.
You start to wonder why
it was you...
until the man
who walked out on you
gets put in your shoes.

© 2010 Julie


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Yes. I see what you're saying. " only if life is fair do they get 'put in your shoes' and thankyou for all the comments. :) Dont ever be afraid to tell me straight up if there is somehting I should change about my poems! thanks.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Thanks. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


only if life is fair do they get 'put in your shoes'
and i find life is not fair; but this write is right on.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on June 5, 2010
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Julie
Julie

Red Lion, PA



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Hey. I love writing poetry... and listening to music. I love goth guys... even though I'm not goth. I love walking in the rain... I love to listen to music. Bullet for my valentine atreyu 30 seconds .. more..

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