Chariots of Heaven
A Book by R.T. Edwins
Available on Kindle (device or app) and Amazon.com
A sci-fi novel by R.T. Edwins about ancient Gods who come to Earth in search of resources, but instead find ghosts from their own past
© 2013 R.T. Edwins
Author's Note
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Was published April 2013. Any comments are useful for helping me write the second book in the series.
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Reviews
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I'm not much for science fiction but your prologue was very intriguing. I could picture the descriptions within my head. I'm not sure what to criticize for the prologue. The "Kira and Kaya's First Adventure" was a little plain in my opinion. I thought that maybe the characters could have been introduced with more detail by showing a bit more personality.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thank you for taking the time to read my work. I can see why the introduction of Kira and Kaya was a.. read moreThank you for taking the time to read my work. I can see why the introduction of Kira and Kaya was a little plain. The first part of the novel is being edited right now (and trust me it needs it) so that's why I didn't post the part that really introduces the sisters and their personalities. After that's edited I'll post the first chapters of the book and you'll be able to get a better feel for who they are and what their story is.
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Added on December 6, 2012
Last Updated on April 9, 2013
Author
R.T. EdwinsPlymouth, MN
About
I am currently working as a paralegal in the intellectual property field, but my passion, drive and dream is to become a successful author. I have one novel published and am currently editing my secon.. more..
Writing
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