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A Poem by Nyx
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another attempt at writing

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Soft you dapple the beams of your fingers

On the branching laces of my plain wrists.

Craft level ripples on my fleshy gutters;

Slow the sullen traces of the breaking tryst.

Kiss then softly my sunken weeping eyes

And hold me strong with the grip of your lies.

      Fast in quiet fleet you do

      your strings


                            cut


© 2012 Nyx


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Nyx
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your use of words is amazing. Short and deep.

Posted 12 Years Ago


very nicely written...i really enjoyed reading it

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on May 18, 2012
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Tags: Poetry, Love

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Nyx
Nyx

Manila, Philippines



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