To Touch You

To Touch You

A Poem by Nyx
"

quick type

"

If by chance I had the hand for holding you
I would sand my palms and smoothen its ridges
So fine they may glide on your knuckles and through
Its woven creases

© 2012 Nyx


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This is a very touching poem which emanates deep from the well of emotions. It may be short but it has a lot of power to it. Great writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A very passionate write. Lovely. Write on.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Maikli pero malaman.. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I would buy this, frame it behind gorilla glass, and put it on my wall.

Lovely, passionate, it made me glad.

Posted 12 Years Ago


short but powerful. I like your style.

Posted 12 Years Ago


very short but has so much love and passion. i really liked it

Posted 12 Years Ago


For a "quick type", this was prettily written, even in its short simplicity. Those are words to melt hearts.



Posted 12 Years Ago


Maybe I am just nutty, but this sort of reminds me of Pour Some Sugar On Me, by Def Leppard,


are you sure this is the right area for posting lol j.k.



nice job honestly

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is sweet and lovely.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on May 17, 2012
Last Updated on May 18, 2012
Tags: Love, Hands

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Nyx
Nyx

Manila, Philippines



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