Old father time

Old father time

A Poem by threelittlebirds
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in my English class we had to write poems on world war one, life in the trenches. this is what I have so far. a bit gloomy I guess but it is what it is.

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Old father time beats us down

Stealing our hope,  stealing our crown

Taking its place is a hopeless frown

Old father time �"

We curse our arrogance

 

Sitting in a decrepit classroom

Old father time teaches us of doom

We sit here, waiting for death

It creeps up on us with baited breath

Old father time �"

We curse the war

 

Like a headstrong ship, sinking without grace

Uncharted waters, bleak to its face

Arrogance takes his stride

That fatherly taker of fools

Old father time �"

We curse our fate

© 2010 threelittlebirds


Author's Note

threelittlebirds
it helps to read poems aloud - find the rythm

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I like this it speaks of truth and i can feel the rhythm in this as I read it.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on July 5, 2010
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