Hand-made theory

Hand-made theory

A Poem by rumnaz islam


Every single time, 

I am wrong. 

I put up gorgeously decorated logic 

ladies and gentlemen, yet, never clap! 

I fail.

 

 

Answers to those theoretical questions,

the algebra, the graphs 

and all the valid explanations

draw in drowning grades.

I plan to shift, 

a different department is the space

I feel I belong to:

where,

already set formulas earn you marks

and mainly respect, of not losing.

  

I will follow, yet, my dream is to lead.

I will let go and stop figuring out:

I promise. But please, 

show me a smile!

i will tell you how i lost mine. 

Love for new ways and thoughts of designing concepts.

 

But the application welcomes the next stage-breaking villain. 

creating a more cruel scenario every day, every night.

There is no boundary of growth.

The series of drama then begins 

under the gold of sun:

Spring flowers drinks in gulps of pouring poison

vigorous, vicious doses from the water bearer. 


 

I want to kill him. 

Kill the bearer, 

who kills smiles to cries 

days to nights 

and bewitch melancholy under the moonless sky.

© 2016 rumnaz islam


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Ana
Wow, a great use of words. I'm not into poetry, but sometimes it really interests me, like your poems and Shadowkai's are the ones that really get to me. I love your fig language...it makes it even more beautiful

Posted 8 Years Ago


rumnaz islam

8 Years Ago

Thank you Ana.. i am glad you liked it!
Nice use of your words
Keep it up
Last five lines were beautifully crafted :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


rumnaz islam

8 Years Ago

Thanks Viper!!
A powerful use of words and thoughts.
"I will follow, yet, my dream is to lead.
I will let go and stop figuring out:
I promise. But please,
show me a smile!
i will tell you how i lost mine.
Love for new ways and thoughts of designing concepts."
The above lines stood out to me. I felt the need to know kindness. The ending left me with the need to know more. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


rumnaz islam

8 Years Ago

Thanks a lot .... I just got back to writing after 3 years and this review means a lot !!!
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You did well and you are welcome.
rumnaz islam

8 Years Ago

thanks a lot Coyote

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Added on March 6, 2016
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