Orchids

Here's a link to my you tube channel where I read my poetry. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZptFkj_ezoo

flower of passion
petals like moist lips in rain
spring bids good morning.

Author's Note

My book, Seedy Town Blues, is available on Amazon.com

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

Great imagery in this brief one, but tell me, did you really mean to put that comma in the last line? To me, the poem reads better without it.

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you, I didn't. Appreciate you.

[Michael Sun Bear]

Very nice Thomas, I too am just waking up, way too early at 3:30am. Thought I would check out what’s new here and Orchids is the first thing I’ve read today. A great start to the day!

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you. Much appreciated.

[Poetic Beauty]

I’d say that is a very welcoming way to wake up

[Thomas W Case]

Thanks. I appreciate you.

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome. All things spicy and sensual catch my attention