Wet Orchids

Here is a link to my you tube channel where I read my poetry. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ucOOifTukWQ

Her lips are like
wet orchids, dressed in
the spring rain,
waiting to be
kissed and
caressed.

Author's Note

My book, Seedy Town Blues Collected Poems is available on Amazon.com, and my book limited edition e-book Rise Up Collected Poems and Short Stories is available on booksie.com

Reviews

[Dylan Macadham]

Waiting, waiting ... in bittersweet hope. Sad & beautiful, nice write.
Dylan

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you. Much appreciated.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Oh, how I love orchids! Equating their beauty to a woman's lips is quite lovely, indeed.

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you. Much appreciated.

[emmajoygreen]

Love and desire melded beautifully, Thomas

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you.

[Relic]

Well said, Thomas. Poems don't have to be long to see the images suggested.

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you.

[Beren Ongur]

aww this is so sweet. so simple but at the same time deep and beautifully explained. kind, warm, cute... lovely. thanks for sharing

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you so much.

[poetgurl]

Enjoyed this piece, beautifully written

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you.

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the use of orchids as a metaphor in this pieces; soft sensual and or so delicate with a hint of beckoning. Sultry yet gentle

[Thomas W Case]

Yes, you get it. Thank you.

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome

[Arundass TP]

I love that metaphor wet orchids. Touching sensual poem

[Thomas W Case]

Thanks, my friend.

[Chris Shaw]

Oooh la la. Very sensual Thomas.

Chris

[Thomas W Case]

lol. Thank you.

[red93]

Interesting experiment in short form Thomas. Definitely has a Tanka feel about the Piece. I liked it a lot ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you.