I Thirst for your Footsteps

I Thirst for your Footsteps

A Poem by Thomas W Case
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Here's a link to my you tube channel where I read my poetry. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cvXsP7xqEh4

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I long for the majestic
sunset of your hair,
windblown, dancing across my cheek…
The burnt orange and lavender…
I want to consume every drop.
I’m thirsty for your
footsteps near my bed, parched with
desire for your presence, your essence.
How long until you wet my
tongue, and quench this fire?
I stalk slumber like a shadow…
my only release from the
hunger and yearning for your
moist lips, like peaches
pressed against mine.

© 2024 Thomas W Case


Author's Note

Thomas W Case
Here is a link to my recently published Limited Edition book, Rise Up Collected Poems and Short Stories.
https://booksie.chainletter.io/i/thomaswcase888

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Sensual, oozes with sugar romance, takes the reader on a colorful ride. Poem flows smooth from start to end with every line piquing the interest more and more. Poetry in motion here. these lines stood out for me, "I stalk slumber like a shadow…
my only release from the
hunger and yearning for your
moist lips"
Thanks for sharing, Thomas. Enjoyed the write!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

1 Month Ago

Thank you. I appreciate it.
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Thomas W Case

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much. I appreciate it.



Reviews

Thomas, your poem is created in such superb wording, from true and gentle love itself,
'I long for the majestic
sunset of your hair,
windblown, dancing across my cheek…' to passion,
' parched with
desire for your presence, your essence.
How long until you wet my
tongue, and quench this fire?'
Start to finish you express man's adoration of and for his lady.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

6 Days Ago

Thank you so much. I appreciate it.
A wonderfully write of yearning. So much beauty but I am rather struck by this line ...

I stalk slumber like a shadow

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

1 Week Ago

Thank you. I appreciate it.
A very glossy, romantic piece…the longing, the desire to to be near her…. To be one with her; peaches are juicy and a “peachy” kiss is what one needs….and the juice will be consumed……
Nice write Thomas🌷
Warmly, B

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you, Betty. I appreciate the comment.
Betty Hermelee

3 Weeks Ago

Always a pleasure Thomas🌷
Wwarmly, B
Thomas,

A woderfully erotic amd sweetly romantic piece of beautiful poetry ...

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much. I appreciate that.
"I stalk slumber like a shadow" a great line. A beautiful and haunting write.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much. I appreciate it.
Fabulous Thomas, such a great evocation of feminine beauty in these well-penned lines. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

1 Month Ago

Thank you, much appreciated.
Sensual, oozes with sugar romance, takes the reader on a colorful ride. Poem flows smooth from start to end with every line piquing the interest more and more. Poetry in motion here. these lines stood out for me, "I stalk slumber like a shadow…
my only release from the
hunger and yearning for your
moist lips"
Thanks for sharing, Thomas. Enjoyed the write!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

1 Month Ago

Thank you. I appreciate it.
This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Thomas W Case

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much. I appreciate it.
A desire worth waiting. Great poem. Enjoyed reading 👍

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

1 Month Ago

Thank you. Much appreciated.
What a red hot sensual write you have finely crafted in this very romantic, passionately hot write, Thomas. The title of the poem drew me in to read it. What an amazing way to tell somebody you miss them: "I Thirst for Your Footsteps!" Wow! SO divinely poetic! Words are toys in your hand, Thomas and you sure know how to play with them. GREAT work!!! Thank you for sharing...

Posted 1 Month Ago


Fanning myself here... filled with passion and desire, your words are powerful. I am sure many women who read this wish the words were for them. Good one. Lydi**

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

1 Month Ago

Thank you, Lydia. I appreciate it.

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Added on July 15, 2024
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Thomas W Case
Thomas W Case

Clear Lake, IA



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Thomas W. Case was born in Oxnard. He has published 3 volumes of poetry. The Bullfrog Dreams of Flying, Artichokes, Avocados, and Van Gogh, and Seedy Town Blues. He has won several poetry contests. Hi.. more..

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