I Thirst for your Footsteps

I Thirst for your Footsteps

A Poem by Thomas W Case
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Here's a link to my you tube channel where I read my poetry. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cvXsP7xqEh4

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I long for the majestic
sunset of your hair,
windblown, dancing across my cheek…
The burnt orange and lavender…
I want to consume every drop.
I’m thirsty for your
footsteps near my bed, parched with
desire for your presence, your essence.
How long until you wet my
tongue, and quench this fire?
I stalk slumber like a shadow…
my only release from the
hunger and yearning for your
moist lips, like peaches
pressed against mine.

© 2024 Thomas W Case


Author's Note

Thomas W Case
Here is a link to my recently published Limited Edition book, Rise Up Collected Poems and Short Stories.
https://booksie.chainletter.io/i/thomaswcase888

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Sensual, oozes with sugar romance, takes the reader on a colorful ride. Poem flows smooth from start to end with every line piquing the interest more and more. Poetry in motion here. these lines stood out for me, "I stalk slumber like a shadow…
my only release from the
hunger and yearning for your
moist lips"
Thanks for sharing, Thomas. Enjoyed the write!

Posted 7 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

7 Months Ago

Thank you. I appreciate it.
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Thomas W Case

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much. I appreciate it.



Reviews

Oooh, so lovely and sensual, gently soft without any rough edges and just how i like sensual poems to read...

Stella

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

2 Days Ago

Thank you, Stella.
Tell us how you really feel Thomas!😅
haha, great write, I feel like a smoke, and I don't smoke!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

1 Month Ago

Lol. Thank you, my friend.
Powerful work on romance.
Put smiles on women's faces.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

1 Month Ago

Thank you, Sami. Much appreciated.
Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

You are welcome muchly.
"I stalk slumber like a shadow" is a great line:) what is it about a peach and poetry LOL I cant tell you how many times peaches come into my poems:/ looks like it happens to you too. Nicely portrayed longing in this

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

1 Month Ago

Thank you, my friend. I appreciate it.
Those desire and wants can keep us awake at night with longing not to be forgotten

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

1 Month Ago

They sure can. Thank you.
Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

You are welcome
' I long for, moist lips pressed against mine. '
That thought alone creates a breathtaking mood.

This is beautiful and sensual, all at the same time.
There's a desire to be so close, for sure.

Your thoughts leave me in complete awe. : )

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

1 Month Ago

Thank you, Brandy, I appreciate it.
My favorite comparison is lips/peaces. This is the type thinking that is genuinely poetic,

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much. I appreciate it.
Hello Thomas, I am 73, have outlived the two best women of my life. Though the body may grow old, it seems the heart does not. Your poem made so many memories surface, resurrected desires, what more could be said about excellent writing? Thank you (I think). Michael Sun Bear

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

2 Months Ago

Thank you. I appreciate the comment.
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MCS
Well woven words of longing and need. Well done!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

2 Months Ago

Thank you, my friend.
MCS

2 Months Ago

my pleasure Thomas.
“Footsteps,” an approach, a return, a coming after… such elation of proximity!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

2 Months Ago

Thank you, my friend.
bred Brick Keshner

2 Months Ago

Most welcome mate

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Added on July 15, 2024
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Thomas W Case
Thomas W Case

Clear Lake, IA



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Thomas W. Case was born in Oxnard. He has published 3 volumes of poetry. The Bullfrog Dreams of Flying, Artichokes, Avocados, and Van Gogh, and Seedy Town Blues. He has won several poetry contests. Hi.. more..

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