I'm Alive

Check out my book, Seedy Town Blues Collected Poems on Amazon.com

Tepid water
between
my toes,
I know
life.

Author's Note

Here's a link to my you tube channel where I read my poetry.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RkfF5u4vn5k

Reviews

[Jayz._>hollow]

This is what writing is about i love poetry.

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you, much appreciated.

[Mystical Ink]

The poem's brevity and simplicity contribute to its impact, allowing the reader to fill in the emotional and experiential gaps with their own memories and feelings. Well cone!

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you so much.

[jessyyjacob]

Hi thomas
Person who tries to make a someone happy by grabbing the khushi of someone else, what do you say them, you bluff them, blame them, cut their way off and say i am sorry, i was worried about you,

Yes you have done mistake anx doing mistake again. This is terrible to see on a person who didnt even learned from it.

Kaikeyi pulled Rama" from his throne for bharatha. But bharatha couldnt even rule and rama got back his throne. But here the true love of rama and sita didnt feel the difference of power. But in our life the hero itself cheating heroine feeding a sed seeker to feed her pleasure. It has never happened in history and will never happen too. Either its not true love or the hero is a cheat.

One who was with someone deep love and suddenly realised her x falling for another her jealousy made her to not to be accepted by both. Thats the god' s justice. Still trying to show i love you you have forgiven my mistakes, at the expense of ruining one more life. What is that a love or killing cunningness.
Love leads to spread love but what is that love when it is ruining someone else life do you ever get sleep if at all yes means you are a demon no divinity prevails in you. We think later of love.

You talked so much wait, move on, who are you to talk about a soul what she did for you and then your tongue makes blame dance to make a smile on others are you worthy to talk about sacrifice what she did. Never guide neither take right to talk when you dont take ths responsibility or own that love.

Jessy jacob.

[jessyyjacob]

Do you have any idea how much torture you are creating in me sith your cunning words, already you have ruined my life, with bleady other reviews you are creating hell in my life. If you write for good reasin or for respecting or love it is good but when you write to hurt others there is no greater sin then this. For every torture you or others creare it will bounce back to you and ruin your life and others too.

Better stop hurting others if you dont hav anyhhing to do.

It shows how much courteous you are for not even responding to my review

[emmajoygreen]

Brief. Visual. True. Brilliant!

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you so much.

[red93]

Nice Work Thomas - I hesitate to ascribe it as a tanka, but it has that 5 line feel to it. Good to be alive - touch wood - definitely. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you. I truly appreciate it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice twist of words and thoughts Thomas. Your book is one of my Lake St. Clair books. I read and I watch the river flow into the lake. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you. Much appreciated.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Thomas.