Her

Sometimes...

The dark dance calls softly,
like Night Shade or Oleander.
Just a little taste...
Just one more slow waltz...
I can smell her
wet orchid while I sleep.
She moves languidly through
my dreams possess me at dawn
with lambent steps.
The love is violent, like a bullfight.
It's sweet and treacherous, ferocious.
Fatal for one of us.
And she's been gored.

Author's Note

I'm pleased to announce the release of my latest boo. Here's a link.
https://booksie.chainletter.io/i/thomaswcase888

I read poetry from my books on my you tube channel. Here's a link.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cONQtjbeEo8

Reviews

[Marie]

Wow! A very sensual write in this finely penned metaphoric gem, dear Thomas. Open to various interpretations, I agree with dear Relic. A little bit of magic through the poem nicely woven. Lovely work, dear friend! Thank you for sharing...

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you Marie for the read and comment.

[Marie]

Most welcome always, dear Thomas...

[Relic]

This is certainly an erotic poem one could derive many things from. Well done, Thomas.

[Thomas W Case]

Thanks. I appreciate the review.

[red93]

Very interesting how you process these complex emotions and shape it all into a unity. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you so much. I appreciate you.

[Sapphus]

I remember one such dance. Amusingly well. Good writing.

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you, kind sir.

[AYVID N]

Thomas, this is a mind-blowing read. It ripped my head away, in a good way. Its like an intense caffeine lift. I loved it!

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you so much. I appreciate that.

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful work friend. Really colorful

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you. Very kind.

[Soren]

This one flows all the way through to the brutal end. Vivid and strong in its power. An explosion of rawness.

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you. So very kind.

[emmajoygreen]

Such raw and honest words, Thomas. Psyche and physicality working in harmony start to finish, sir!

'She moves languidly through
my dreams possess me at dawn
with lambent steps.'

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you so much for the kind comment.

[emmajoygreen]

Will find some of your spoken words at the weekend, when I can focus.

[Poetic Beauty]

So this to speaks of having dreams of addiction. I have heard many people talk about “dope dreams” after they become sober and clean.

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you for reading and commenting.