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I can taste the lavender sky, smell the pink, squeeze the orange, and drink it like a Screwdriver. My angel with jaded wings; My heart sings when I hold her. I can touch the burnt umber of her hair. And I'm in Wonderland, because she's my Alice, and I want to bring her safely home.
That is amazing line. Sounds like a very unique woman who means the world to the narrator in this poem. All the great ones are a bit crazy or different!!
my Alice...Screwdrivers were the first drinks I ever drank.
I like the imagery that deals with the sky, the sun, the heaven when together...and she your jaded angel...but you can make her smile.
j.
This could be a dream....or it could be a wish to have your love be beside you at all times...perhaps she left and you want to bring her home.... either way..it is fine writing...
Warmly, B
Thomas W. Case was born in Oxnard. He has published 3 volumes of poetry. The Bullfrog Dreams of Flying, Artichokes, Avocados, and Van Gogh, and Seedy Town Blues. He has won several poetry contests. Hi.. more..