Into the Dark

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With furrowed brow
and a soul full of
sorrow,
I trudge the
lonely road of
perdition.
Providence guides me
as I stumble and fall.
Not even sex or
chocolate
can save me now.

Author's Note

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dY6LUlURLZs
Here is a link to my you tube channel where I read from my book, Seedy Town Blues Collected Poems, available on Amazon.com

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Not even sex or chocolate can save me now gave me a slight chuckle. I mean sometimes those things help in the moment but they definitely aren’t a permanent fix

[Thomas W Case]

Very true. Definitely not. They seem to be my go-to.
Thanks for reading and commenting.

[Poetic Beauty]

I’d have to say mine would be coffee, chocolate and sex as well.

[Thomas W Case]

I love coffee as well.

[Poetic Beauty]

I have to have my coffee in the morning most of all but I don’t drink soda so it’s coffee water and tea mostly

[Chris Shaw]

I appreciated the humour. Chocolate always works for me:)

Chris

[Thomas W Case]

Thanks, Chris. Much appreciated.

[Soren]

A most interesting image in this poem it begins barren and dark and ends with some humor loved it.

[Thomas W Case]

I appreciate the read and comment.

[Ken Simm.]

Chocolate no, but the other thing, perhaps. This is such a clever use of words.

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you Ken for reading and commenting.

[emmajoygreen]

First comes some serious contemplation then.. the naughtily humorous finish!

[Thomas W Case]

Lol. Thank you so much for commenting.