Hope Took a Vacation

Hope Took a Vacation

A Poem by Thomas W Case
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I saw the dawn
rape lonely
orphans,
while bats ate
butterflies,
cats killed sparrows
and hope flew
south for
the winter.

On my way
downtown,
I've seen the
dead through
windows at the
drycleaners, eating
hamburgers with
starched faces

The librarians,
dry and dusty,
pray for rain,
as hippos weep,
hyenas sigh,
and hope
flies south for
the winter.

I've seen the strange
hand of
circumstance
wear the jester's
hat.
I've seen destiny
angry turn her
back, while potential
is wasted on
the railroad tracks.
Yeah, hope flew
south for the
winter.

© 2024 Thomas W Case


Author's Note

Thomas W Case
Check out my book, Seedy Town Blues Collected Poems on Amazon.com and if you get the chance, swing by my you tube channel where I read my poetry.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6SGp5pzdoGY

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Life isn’t always kind or fair. There are so many that long for something different something better.

Hope flew south for the winter is a strong statement and yes many times people have lost hope for one reason or another.

You penned this thought uniquely and well

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

8 Months Ago

I really appreciate the comment and read.
Poetic Beauty

8 Months Ago

You are welcome



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This is a really clever write, one I enjoyed.
Also sad in a way as touching. Nicely written

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

8 Months Ago

Very much appreciated.
Life isn’t always kind or fair. There are so many that long for something different something better.

Hope flew south for the winter is a strong statement and yes many times people have lost hope for one reason or another.

You penned this thought uniquely and well

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

8 Months Ago

I really appreciate the comment and read.
Poetic Beauty

8 Months Ago

You are welcome
This sound like the makings for a song and good one too. The metaphor and imagery is wonderful and I must say this is one of my favorite of yours.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

8 Months Ago

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.
Life throws piles of nonsense at us daily and it's hard to stay above it sometimes.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

8 Months Ago

Yes, it does. Thanks for the comment.
Wow every day life is there hope, love how you brought this together, lol yes the birds fly south and in Texas there's a border with hambers and Fry's its the American way, thank you for sharing.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

8 Months Ago

Thanks for the read and review.

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Added on February 29, 2024
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Tags: life, depression, metaphor, symbolism

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Thomas W Case
Thomas W Case

Clear Lake, IA



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Thomas W. Case was born in Oxnard. He has published 3 volumes of poetry. The Bullfrog Dreams of Flying, Artichokes, Avocados, and Van Gogh, and Seedy Town Blues. He has won several poetry contests. Hi.. more..

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