Dry Land

Dry Land

A Poem by Thomas W Case
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Check out my you tube channel where I read my poetry. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P2roycihKc0&t=182s

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No commitment
no devotion.
I'm like a boat on the
ocean with you;
tossed and broken by
the waves of your emotions.
Your hurricane is dangerous.
I'm heading for dry land.

© 2024 Thomas W Case


Author's Note

Thomas W Case
Check out my book, Seedy Town Blues Collected Poems on Amazon.com.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P2roycihKc0&t=182s
Link to my you tube channel where I read my poetry.

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I've just come out of a relationship very much like this one.
Could never see the hurricane coming.
Strong write.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

10 Months Ago

Thanks for the read.
Anita Frader

10 Months Ago

My pleasure!


when you get that certain gut feeling .. maybe its best to run with it .. and fast .. Neville

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

10 Months Ago

Yes, so true. Appreciate the read.
commitment can only be so strong when there isn't enough coming from the other side.
j.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

10 Months Ago

So very true. Appreciate the read.

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Added on February 17, 2024
Last Updated on February 17, 2024
Tags: pain, relationships, serenity

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Thomas W Case
Thomas W Case

Clear Lake, IA



About
Thomas W. Case was born in Oxnard. He has published 3 volumes of poetry. The Bullfrog Dreams of Flying, Artichokes, Avocados, and Van Gogh, and Seedy Town Blues. He has won several poetry contests. Hi.. more..

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