I Want

I want to kiss
her mouth in the
spring rain,
to feel her tight
wet body against mine,
while the water
pounds down around us.
I want to
carry her to
my underground
lair, and taste
her orchid
until she wilts in
sweat drenched ecstasy.

Author's Note

Check out my book, Seedy Town Blues Collected Poems, on Amazon.com Here is a link to my You Tube Channel where I read 3 poems, including the poem, I Want.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rWJVDxekql8

Reviews

[living lavender]

passionately written. longing dripping with each line.
{yes. pun intended. haha.} enticing piece.

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you.

[Neville]

there is always a danger of drowning under such circumstances .. might I therefore respectfully suggest you let someone you trust know your co-ordinates .. and preferably not her husband .. nice one T .. N :)

[Thomas W Case]

Yes, thank you bro.

[Stella Armour]

Wow .... sensual wishes that sound delightful ...

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you Stella

[Betty Hermelee]

a beautiful, sensual poem with vivid images that literally come alive....every word is perfectly chosen.
Warmly, B

[Thomas W Case]

Thanks, Betty.

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome Thomas
Warmly, B

[Re-Pete]

wow. well done. flooding poetry. leaves a lasting high-water mark ... :)

[Thomas W Case]

Thanks, Pete.

[John Sullivan]

Oh goodness, to be young again... sensual and daring

[Thomas W Case]

Thanks, John

[D. Mansfield]

Short, concise, erotica done tastefully, nice job

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you.

[John the Baptist]

Passion, without a single vulgarity. Of such is the best erotica made.

[Thomas W Case]

Thanks, John. Much appreciated.