My First Love

he made my stomach do somersaults

He made my eyes glow

He made my face hurt from smiling

he was happiness in its finest form

He made me feel safe

he wrapped his arms around me and held me while i cried

He was protection

He broke my heart

he loved another

He left

He left me in pieces

He was heartbreak

Author's Note

Ignore grammatical errors

Reviews

[Div]

The poem is endearing. It is refreshing and subtle, without getting too descriptive. Kudos. Keep writing.

[Antoñyo]

A nice but too-often memory set in stone to last awhile.
Thanks for the share.

[Littlelady]

Was that sarcasm?

[Antoñyo]

LOL...re-reading, I think I see how it can be mistaken as that...No, I give good reviews or none at all, LL ...I meant,, the poem is nice, but unfortunately, the topic happens too often...You put the words of how many have felt on paper and make it real and lasting (or, set in stone)... My apologies for the mix up, and I hope it came out better this time.
...but, are you sure you want to be called "Littlelady" because that has been used towards women sarcastically (here in America).? ...and frankly, I feel uncomfortable typing it because of that. I will just say "LL" for now.
Thanks again.

[Littlelady]

Littlelady has been my nickname here is Australia since I was a baby.

[Antoñyo]

As long as you are not offended, I'm fine with it.

[Littlelady]

Course Im not
Its my nickname