What is my place

About a girl that doesnt know where her place is in the world

Where oh where do I belong?

Is my place in this world to be alone?

Is it my place to be happy?

What is my purpose? 

Is it to follow my dream or to be in forever misery?

One day I will know, one day I will see

What it is like to know who i am. 

People dont know, and it can be hard

But it will eventually get there.

Finding my place, slowly but surely

Even if it is to be ever so lonely. 

Reviews

[KittyKatgirl]

This is highly relatable to a lot of people. No matter how far they get in life they still don't know their place in the world. It has a great rhythm and easy to read. It is pretty good and since you had done this right on the spot it deserves an A+++ lol. Anyway great job. :)

[Cameron Wilkinson]

Wow, This poem speaks to me like a lot, you have serious talent.
I think you are a good writer. You are amazing comapred to me xD
anyway. Its pretty good.

[Littlelady]

As I have said many times before, I speak about my emotions by writing.

[gabiaimee]

Ah I have definitely felt this way before. Sometimes life seems to go so terribly that it feels as if you are meant to be miserable.Same goes for being alone, or belonging in general. Lovely raw thoughts, but the rhythm is a bit broken in places. If the intention was simply to get thoughts out into writing then I guess it doesn't matter :) nicely done

[Julia Ledo]

Relatable content, but could use a bit more polish. The rhythm of the poem gets broken by a few odd lines, reading it out loud might show this. Otherwise I think with a bit more editing it could be perfect. Awesome otherwise

[Littlelady]

My writing reflects how i feel and when i have "disjointed lines" or whatever it is, it means my thought pattern was disjointed
When i write for school, then i edit at least 5-10 times, but when it is my thoughts, i dont
but thank you. I will take that on board

[Olivia]

nice piece about growing up

[beautiful dreamer]

Suggestions :)
"or to forever be in misery"

i guess that was it. beautifully written besides that one thing :) good work!

[Amber Lily]

We never know our own true potential until we get out there and try. Sometimes it takes others a little longer, but that's okay. Because once you get there you will see it was worth the wait. Great work here :)

[Littlelady]

I am beginning to find my place
I already know i am to go into the forces. That is all i know

[Amber Lily]

Good luck :)

[Littlelady]

Thank you for that

[Chidoriflower]

I relate to this because I'm still trying to find my place somehwere, my place where I can call home. Truth be told it's lonely but I think u can find it. Excellent poetry btw, littlelady

[PenguinEmpiress]

Very beautiful! And its so easy to relate to! This is most likely something that goes through most peoples heads, nearly everyday! Well Done!

[Littlelady]

thank you for that

[Avinash]

Some true questions asked in a beautiful way.

[Littlelady]

Im not exactly immune to not waking up in tears because i dont know where my place is in this world
For me, it is harder to find because i battle my mind each day

[Avinash]

We all have to in some way. Some have to do more and some less.

[Littlelady]

My point exactly

[Aventicus]

In truth, I haven't the slightest as to where to begin my review, other than that we are of the same heart and mind. For this longing, this endless search for a seemingly invisible purpose, is a very sore thing to a heart and a very confusing thing to the mind. Those like us, we must live in silence, never voicing our torment to others, for fear of becoming ever more lost by the answers we receive from those who do stand where we do. And so, we must trudge on, ever seeking in pain, but always hopeful for that fateful day of revelation.

[Littlelady]

Well that optimisitc
I voice my torment to everyone and they voice it tooo
But i guess it all depends on who the person is and what their personality is like

[Aventicus]

True, very true. I was speaking a little more from my own experience than in general.

[Littlelady]

i speak from experience too