Going Up

One, Two, Three, Four,

Time To Crawl Across The Floor.

Five, Six, Seven, Eight,

Walking Now, Need A Gate.

Nine, Ten, Eleven, Twelve,

Gotta Go, There's The Bell.

Twelve, Eleven, Ten, Nine,

I Got To Be The Leader In Line.

Eight, Seven, Six, Five,

Middle School, I Have To Survive.

Four, Three, Two, One, 

High School, Here I Come.

One, Two, Three, Four,

Have A Boyfriend I Adore.

Five, Six, Seven, Eight,

Wondering About My Fate.

Nine, Ten, Eleven, Twelve,

Telling The Passenger Seat Farewell.

Twelve, Eleven, Ten, Nine,

Going Out To Have Some Wine.

Eight, Seven, Six, Five,

Tonight I'm The Bride.

Four, Three, Two, One,

Next Comes Our First Born Son.

Then The Cycle Is Redone.

Author's Note

what do u think? keep in mind this was done in about 15 minutes so it does suck severely bad.

Reviews

[ANTO]

I think the concept was a good one but fitting it all into a poem based on a single count up to twelve then down again (which is what I assume, the initial intention was) was too ambitious and the resultant dual count up and down really took away from what was a fine idea.
Dont be too hard on yourself, it would have tested anyone this brief you set yourself.
Great effort !