Dangerous Yet Beautiful

Demons are coming

And they're after me.

Nobody can save me so

Go, leave me behind.

Everything hurts and I try to

Run but they grab me and drag me

Out of here to way down

Under. But nobody misses me

So they keep me in hell.

Young and so much life ahead. Never

Ever seeing the outside world

That everyone sees as 

Beautiful but it truly is

Evil with pain and sadness

Attacking you until you can't

Understand why you're alive but

They say they'll miss you.

I see the truth. Everyone will

Forget me. Nobody admits it, which is

Unbelievable, because everyone knows they

Lie.

Author's Note

how is it?

Reviews

[KanaDream]

Extremely well written and it paints a dark picture. The way you arranged it also adds to it's rhythm and the words you wrote down the column add to the meaning. Some people overlook the fact that everyone forgets. They wish to be remembered but it's just not true. Nobody remembers for long. Everyone lies. I like the simple meaning you've thread into the words. Very nice. Keep Dreaming. ^^