Make It Stop

Screaming

Yelling

All Day

Every Day

Go Away!

You Never Learn!

Then Threats And Insults

One After The Other

Like Gun Shots

We Need To Put Her 

Somewhere

Or Standing And Threatening

Some Physical Pain

Haven't They Hurt Me

Enough?

I Cry And Beg 

For It All To Stop

But It Goes On

Until I Finally Run

And Cry Myself

To Sleep...

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

I did not see any attempts in your poem to address the noise. No knocking on their door, no police visit! I think this distracts from the angst you are trying to build up in your poem.

[ThisIsBatman]

yea, i see where u r coming from. however, this is exactly what happens to me...there is no knocking on the door or police visits. but none is needed. this is exactly what happens. no physical pain, just threats.