Stormy Skies

Black waves,

A mirroring sky-

Rushing waves,

And roaring thunder

Where stars lie-

Crashing waves,

And continuous winds

Determined to not die-

Know a storm is coming,

The storm is near;

Let the rains fall,

The sky’s quick tears;

Feel the storm growing,

For the storm is here. 

Reviews

[Maan]

Preciseness remains but you let the thought come out pretty nicely, that's the reason what makes it outta ordinary. :) I like it.

[Levi Levin]

Good job Sarah!

[Sarah Marie]

Why, thank you!

[Levi Levin]

Your welcome:)

[EllenMichelle29]

Good work, I loved this

[Clockwork]

I like the idea of this poem and the images you have here. In some way the "black waves" and the "mirroring sky" remind me of a scene from Cormac Mccarthy's novel The Road.

I think this is the solid poem as is, and I enjoyed reading it. I do think that some of the lines could be re-ordered to add a bit more clarity and to smooth out the progression of events. Overall though, I liked what I saw and I am glad I found this poem.

[Lina Grey]

fast paced and suspenseful. I like how you kept coming back to the waves, which often reflect the sky above. I do like storms, and you've captured one nicely. ~em

[Sarah Marie]

Thanks! I'm glad you like this. I appreciate your review!