When It Comes

Nothing can be done
When love comes;
Nothing at all matters
When one another flatters
The tugs on the heartstrings,
The notes of joy one sings
When love is found
And spread all around.
The quickening heartbeats
Making man and woman weak
Are dangerous things;
Are wonderful things;
When eyes are captured-
What sweet, merciless rapture.
The downward drag of a kiss-
Such captivating, sudden bliss.
When love comes
Nothing can be done-
Why would anything want to be?
Why even attempt to breathe
Without love in each sigh-
Why ever tell it goodbye?

Reviews

[Dark and Mysterious]

Beautiful write....

[The Fallen]

Aweh amazing poem (:

[G!o]

First i was totally captivated by the name of the poem 'cause i love a song by the same name. To the piece, this is lovely...i adore your writing style and choice of words. Your writing is direct and capturing. Lovely Marie.

[Sarah Marie]

Oh, I never heard of the song. I will have to look it up. I'm glad you like this, and I appreciate your comments and support!

[G!o]

The song is by Tyler Hilton, really amazing. The boy who played Chris Keller in One Tree Hill. I love good writing that's over the edge and i must admit you got it.

[Sami Khalil]

Such captivating, sudden bliss
when love comes...
Nice write

[Sarah Marie]

Thanks! I appreciate it!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...