A revolt of emotion

A revolt of emotion

A Poem by Sukriti Suki

The softest of emotion will make you realise
you were the one suffering 
and you kept telling yourself, it's not all lies

The missing beat of the heart was saying
you are about to have trouble
and you kept telling yourself, it's butterflies

The expectation to not have any expectation
you thought is the only way to love
and you kept telling yourself, it's love in disguise.

© 2018 Sukriti Suki


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Although it seems sad, after reading it twice I felt this poem was, simply put, realistic. I like how you represent the beauty of love adding its bitterness in the same lyrics. Thank you for this beautiful poem

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nicely written. Love is complicated.

Posted 6 Years Ago


yes you are right about that, a love in disguise.. and that is the hardest part trying to deny the real emotion involved.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on March 23, 2018
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