Depression

Everything seems right
Until something goes wrong
Then all you can do
Is turn on that song

Draw out the lyrics
Until they make sense
Put it on repeat
Don't let yourself rest

Pick up the pen
And write out your thoughts
Until there's that feeling
That you're finally lost

Let yourself loose
As you lie there in bed
While horrible thoughts
Dance around in your head

Close your eyes
To see those bright stars
Let your heart open
Expose it to wars

Now all you do
Is think about death
And how things would be
If this were your last breath

Don't act on emotion
Or do what you will
But just keep in mind
Time never stands still

Reviews

[Liv]

Okay, so I that everytime I get upset or mad, so needless to say this is very easy to relate to for myself. I think the last two lines, they don't flow 100% well but they still do flow.. Overall, I liked this a lot!