Time

I'm losing time

It's out of control

The words have to rhyme

My thoughts going cold

 

The clocks are ticking

In my head

The moments wasting

So many dead

 

Lost in time

But hands keep moving

These words rhyme

But I'm still losing

Reviews

[MNeilsen]

As stated earlier this evening I really like this piece. The first and third stanzas so calm while the second is sort hurried. Fingers tapping watching the clock waiting for the end, for freedom.

[Wolfbaby]

This was pretty good. It had good flow and you chose your words well. In the second stanza, the second line is a little out of sync with the rest of the lines, but it was good overall. Great Job!

~Wolfbaby

[Lexi =]]

This was a good poem. I liked it! Good job its my favorite. lol =]