Fear

Lost in life

Save our souls

The transparent

Are lowly fools

 

Take the innocent

Put them aside

By the laws of nature

We must abide

 

Apocalypse

Is drawing near

But i's not the end

We should fear

 

Through the labrynth

Of twisted lies

What we should fear

Would be our lives

 

The pessimism

Makes you cringe

But solid reality

Makes you grin

 

Lost in life

Save our souls

You're transparent

You lowly fool

Reviews

[Christopher.Holmberg]

Woah this is a very delightful piece.

"The pessimism

Makes you cringe

But solid reality

Makes you grin" i like this stanza especially. keep it up
A+

[Lexi =]]

Love your poem. man i love all your poems =) your a real good writer