Memory

NA

Today I went to the place
Of memories and lies
Of happiness and dreams
Of hopeless cries 

When I got to the place
I felt a feeling from never before
My head was in the clouds
My heart became sore 

I wished that I had just stayed home
Because the feeling I had
Was all but my own
Because then I felt sad and all alone

Reviews

[Liverpoolfan]

This is really good. It's brillant, in fact. It's quite short, I suppose, but that doesn't matter because of the quality of the writing. The poem just flows, seaminglessly. It's like you've written it without even trying. Obviously, your a very very talented writer. The way the poem is structured is also very good. And the repetition used keeps the reader engaged. It's actually faultless.

[MNeilsen]

You have surprised me with your wonderful heartfelt works. The pain with which you write makes me wonder just exactly how old you really are. You write like an old soul.