The Sea of Sand

The sea of sand

Engrossed in yellow,

They sky so blue

It makes you tremble

 

And in the depths

Of the arid sea,

You suffocate

On the air you breathe

Reviews

[JRB]

short yet sweet

[State of Grace]

So short but really deep. Great job!

[Hisou_Tenshi]

Wow.

[vamp writer]

deep man, i like it!!!!

[kuru]

hmm i read this and i let out a deep sigh in a good way :)

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Marvelous!