4 am thoughts

4 am thoughts

A Story by Ioana Georgiana

For she is what I am not: tall, skinny, confident.That image is a projection of what I want to be. In hope that one day you'll look past that and see me for who I am. Undress my soul without touching me. What you find behind layers of self loathing and insecurity is me. Raw. Real. I lay my heart on a silver platter for you, no matter how many times it has been crushed. I would allow you to do it. Every single time. Truly. Madly. Deeply.

© 2016 Ioana Georgiana


Advertise Here
Want to advertise here? Get started for as little as $5

My Review

Would you like to review this Story?
Login | Register




Reviews

She? Do you mean the girl that is within you? The one who has been screaming out through the yawns and senseless thoughts? nuisance you call her, to ignore the truth of the reflection of your own mirror. Full of smog, wipe it off, see yourself. That's Raw, that's Real

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is what unconditional love is, it lets the other person torn us apart as many times they want. We sell ourselves in the hands of pain and brokenness to give love to them.

The declaration of unconditional love in this poem is so very strong and the reader can hear it.

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 7 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

108 Views
2 Reviews
Rating
Added on December 27, 2016
Last Updated on December 27, 2016
Tags: unrequited, love, pain, hurt

Author

Ioana Georgiana
Ioana Georgiana

Romania



About
A twenty year old with a knack for everything written. I breathe by filling my lungs with words. You can also find me at jolenepoetry on Instagram. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


DISCARDED DISCARDED

A Poem by hcarson


Trolls... Trolls...

A Poem by hcarson