humans

humans

A Poem by Ioana Georgiana

we are humans
we do wrong 
without speaking
we bring joy without touching
if we weren't meant 
to destroy and  create
then why is it so beautiful to even exist?

© 2015 Ioana Georgiana


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You are strong and to the point. I like that.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I reccommend adding punctuation where necessary and delete the word "even" in the last line. It will flow much better and be less confusing without it. Good intent with this piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on October 4, 2015
Last Updated on October 4, 2015
Tags: humans, beauty, beautiful, existence

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Ioana Georgiana
Ioana Georgiana

Romania



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A twenty year old with a knack for everything written. I breathe by filling my lungs with words. You can also find me at jolenepoetry on Instagram. more..

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