The Camping Trip***

***This is a hold title until I come up with something that fits better. I know this needs serious work. I'm not a professional by any means. I know the grammar is off, the story itself could use work. That's why I'm finally branching out. I want to make this into something. I'm really hoping I can get the help I need and turn this into something good. I'm open to any suggestions. My love of nature and cooking is apparent. I want to know what needs to be improved. How is the dialogue so far. Am I straying off topic etc etc. This is something I'm becoming passionate about and I want to make it great.