Humanity

Humans,
Humans society rakes the Earth like scars on our skin,
Our wars like long serrated knives dragging slowly,
Our bombs like bullets ripping though skin, muscle, and bone,
Our searching minds like firing guns,
Our own heart a weak salve,

Reviews

[Alucard6336]

Well i am a human who protects humans with my all and everything, no matter what the cost.

You think humanity is the problem? I don't think so. What's really the problem is the people who write about it and don't do anything to help out.

[Tess]

Uh I never actually wrote that humanity was the problem. I'm sorry that my writing caused you to respond so negatively, and in my poem I was referring to the suffering of humans, the earth, and animals human conflict has caused and how we as a whole race including myself, you, and everyone has failed to see the repeating cycle of greed the human race has been caught in. To end this little rant here this is just my own personal opinion that I decided to share, and you are entitled to your opinion as I am to mine. But that's all this is one personal opinion.