Prying In the Mind

Prying In the Mind

A Poem by Wildwood Fox

I am curious to see,
 to see how it would be,
 to stand in your shoes.
Would they be to large?
Would they be to small?
Would they fit better than my own?
I am curious to see,
 to see how it would be,
 to sit where you have sat.
Would it be to quiet?
Would it be to loud?
Or would it be just right?
I am curious to see,
to see how it would be,
to be stuck inside your head.
Would it be to empty?
Would it be to full?
Or would it be just like mine?

© 2013 Wildwood Fox


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Yes at times we do wonder what it would be like to be in some ones shoe...to know what it is like to be them and if they are similar or very different from us. This sounded good...the only thing that I would change is the last line, it would read better like "Or would it be just like mine."

Good Job

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wildwood Fox

11 Years Ago

Thank you for pointing out my little mistake on the last line, I'll fix it :)
~*~Peace Keeper~*~

11 Years Ago

You're welcome, happy to help ^^



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Yes at times we do wonder what it would be like to be in some ones shoe...to know what it is like to be them and if they are similar or very different from us. This sounded good...the only thing that I would change is the last line, it would read better like "Or would it be just like mine."

Good Job

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wildwood Fox

11 Years Ago

Thank you for pointing out my little mistake on the last line, I'll fix it :)
~*~Peace Keeper~*~

11 Years Ago

You're welcome, happy to help ^^

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Added on July 7, 2013
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Wildwood Fox
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My name is Morgan, I'm from a little town with big dreams of seeing something more. I don't write much but I enjoy getting my thoughts and feelings out on paper. I get most of my inspiration from auth.. more..

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