I am curious to see, to see how it would be, to stand in your shoes. Would they be to large? Would they be to small? Would they fit better than my own? I am curious to see, to see how it would be, to sit where you have sat. Would it be to quiet? Would it be to loud? Or would it be just right? I am curious to see, to see how it would be, to be stuck inside your head. Would it be to empty? Would it be to full? Or would it be just like mine?
Yes at times we do wonder what it would be like to be in some ones shoe...to know what it is like to be them and if they are similar or very different from us. This sounded good...the only thing that I would change is the last line, it would read better like "Or would it be just like mine."
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Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you for pointing out my little mistake on the last line, I'll fix it :)
Yes at times we do wonder what it would be like to be in some ones shoe...to know what it is like to be them and if they are similar or very different from us. This sounded good...the only thing that I would change is the last line, it would read better like "Or would it be just like mine."
Good Job
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you for pointing out my little mistake on the last line, I'll fix it :)
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