AW - OH !

In a dog eat dog

dog eat cat world

not even a mouse

nor even a flea

is smaller

than

me

!

Reviews

[Vishuddha]

End of the food chain. Best end to be on.

[thewholesoul]

Hello Vishuddha, many thanks for the read and review! i will scratch your back shortly. be well

[An owl on the moon]

Powerful flow and form that speaks to the senses... the diminishing life we too often feel... So well done.

[thewholesoul]

cheers my friend. thanks so much for taking the time to read this. much appreciated

[BennyBooth]

I really liked it. I have read some poems from the sixties that played with this style but this one has it's own unique flavor! Awesome job.

[thewholesoul]

cheers mate. thxs for the read and comment.

[Joe Malgeri]

Cool, in more than one way, and on more than one level. Good ideas...

[thewholesoul]

cool comment, cheers for that.